Miss, your strongest point are still the colors. You have to choose between realistic & cartoon for your character, it's still inbetween. Her expression makes her face looks like a male. Her forearm is uncertain, and you cannot hide it under a smoke. Keep working on this character until you got it right and it rocks !
Thank you) I have got a lot of sketches) If I have got some mood I sit and draw all day. It could be 6-7 hours. I killed a lot of time for sketch, because I haven't got any scanner. On the paper I could drew anything in black and white)))